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3/2 – Panels 2,3 and 4 are flashbacks. Change something visually to indicate that it’s a flashback. White borders, no gutter, no rendering, up to you.
A motorcade of limo-like cars makes its way down a street. But there’s an explosion, causing the first 4 cars to fly in different directions. You can see a trail of smoke coming from the explosion going upwards.
Script by Butch Mapa
A subtle inverted bling on panel 4 to descibe his gesture.
Yeah, that last panel was my blog banner. :)
3/1 – High angle, close up shot. We’re looking down at Lana. She looks agitated and wide-eyed. Like she’s straight at [HERO], but she’s not seeing him.
LANA: THE BEATINGS STARTED AFTER A FEW MONTHS. HE SAID HE’D KILL ME IF I TRIED TO LEAVE…
CAP: A TEAR STREAMS DOWN HER FACE, DELICATE, OUTLINING THE CURVE OF HER CHEEK.
LANA: I THOUGHT I WAS FREE LAST MONTH… IF IT WASN’T FOR THAT DAMN SUIT.
CAP: A TEAR STREAMS DOWN HER FACE, DELICATE, OUTLINING THE CURVE OF HER CHEEK.
LANA: I THOUGHT I WAS FREE LAST MONTH… IF IT WASN’T FOR THAT DAMN SUIT.
3/2 – Panels 2,3 and 4 are flashbacks. Change something visually to indicate that it’s a flashback. White borders, no gutter, no rendering, up to you.
A motorcade of limo-like cars makes its way down a street. But there’s an explosion, causing the first 4 cars to fly in different directions. You can see a trail of smoke coming from the explosion going upwards.
CAP: I’D HEARD ABOUT THAT. RIO’S MOTORCADE WAS AMBUSHED BY A RADICAL VIGILANTE GROUP CALLED CYNTH. LOUD, VIOLENT ASSASSINATIONS WERE THEIR TRADEMARK.
CAP: THEY’D PLANNED IT PERFECTLY, QUICKLY ISOLATING THE OLD MAN. THE WHOLE CITY WAS WATCHING AS THEY WENT IN FOR THE KILL…
3/3 – POV of a CYNTH member. We can see his arm, there’s a CYNTH tattoo on it. Rio standing on a pile of rubble as all sorts of energy beams and missiles hit him.A force field is stopping all of the weapons. Lotsa explosions.
CAP:
...ONLY TO BE STOPPED BY RIO’S PERSONAL DEFENSE SUIT. NO MATTER WHAT KIND OF ORDNANCE THE CYNTH PACKED, THEY COULDN’T CRACK THE SUIT.
3/4 – Close up on Rio. Debris flies around him. Almost satanic laugh as he recovers his senses and realizes he isn’t getting hurt.
CAP: RIO WAS LAUGHING AS HIS PRIVATE GUARD RECOVERED AND ROUTED THE ATTACKERS.
CAP: THEY’D PLANNED IT PERFECTLY, QUICKLY ISOLATING THE OLD MAN. THE WHOLE CITY WAS WATCHING AS THEY WENT IN FOR THE KILL…
3/3 – POV of a CYNTH member. We can see his arm, there’s a CYNTH tattoo on it. Rio standing on a pile of rubble as all sorts of energy beams and missiles hit him.A force field is stopping all of the weapons. Lotsa explosions.
CAP:
...ONLY TO BE STOPPED BY RIO’S PERSONAL DEFENSE SUIT. NO MATTER WHAT KIND OF ORDNANCE THE CYNTH PACKED, THEY COULDN’T CRACK THE SUIT.
3/4 – Close up on Rio. Debris flies around him. Almost satanic laugh as he recovers his senses and realizes he isn’t getting hurt.
CAP: RIO WAS LAUGHING AS HIS PRIVATE GUARD RECOVERED AND ROUTED THE ATTACKERS.
Script by Butch Mapa
A subtle inverted bling on panel 4 to descibe his gesture.
Yeah, that last panel was my blog banner. :)
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